Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
Is this all I am to you?
Just something to lose?
Someone to hurt?
To hit and abuse?

Not physically
For that would leave marks
Not even mentally
You go straight for the heart

Like a waterfall cascading
It won't ever stop
I'll be here still waiting
Or so I once thought

I can never fight this feeling
But I can't help that it's here
Maybe it'd be best
If I could just disappear...
Maybe it'd be best
If I could just disappear...


Somedays, that's all I want...
Add a Comment:
 
:iconnooneknowswheretogo:
NoOneKnowsWhereToGo Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist
I actually went through something like this with my used to be best friend about 2 years ago, it still bothers me. I don't understand why people that used to be so nice to you and talk to you everyday can just decide to make you feel like shit, especially since most of it is lies. Most of the time I feel like it would be better if I did disappear... At least I can talk to you if I stay :3 In case you're wondering after that day I avoided her like the black plauge xD Now I never have to see her ever again. I'm sure when I actually have friends that I'm sure will not go away too, I'll get over it.
Reply
:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm real sorry to hear that ene but you can't just let it keep bothering you. You just gotta acknowledge that it happened and let it go~ That's real strength: letting go of what hurts.
Reply
:iconnooneknowswheretogo:
NoOneKnowsWhereToGo Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist
It's just hard when people keep bringing it up, but I'm trying :3 It actually made me cry, but I'll be okay eventually
Reply
:iconsparkly55123:
sparkly55123 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My best friend recently decided to abandon me.
Was that all I was?
Just something to lose?
...
Reply
:iconkosha21:
kosha21 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
it's beautiful and I feel that way too sometimes. totally understand. I like!!!
Reply
:iconadrianosart:
AdrianosArt Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is very sorrowful, and the last stanza really packs the punch that leaves your stomach hurting. The best thing to do with a person or many people who just make you feel miserable all the time is to overcome their bitterness and then leave them behind!

Anyway, you wove your emotion into this poem wonderfully.
Reply
:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so very much<3

I can agree that overcoming the bitterness part...but leaving the people behind, I think would be hard to do, under certain circumstances.
Reply
:iconadrianosart:
AdrianosArt Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome. It can be difficult, but it can also be better for you. I had to do that once, because one of my friends was very mentally abusive to me and so, I finally just let her go. Things started getting better immediately. I was more confident in myself. You just can't let people hold you down. They have no right to do that.
Reply
:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Okay, now I agree with everything you say. I'm glad to know that you managed to pull yourself through that. It must have been hard..
Reply
:iconadrianosart:
AdrianosArt Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It was very much worth it. If I can do it, than there is nothing stopping anyone else from doing it too =D
Reply
:iconjackie0527:
Jackie0527 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
Always remember that there are people that care about you. It's what I do when I'm down.
Reply
:icon12redroses:
12redroses Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
Amazing! That is the only word I can think of to describe this. :heart:
Reply
:iconpauperprivations:
PauperPrivations Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If only people thought about what they were going to say, and how it could affect someone. Think about it with every single scenario :/

Well written!
Reply
:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
People often speak before thinking, like the old saying "Look before you leap." Yea, that doesn't happen to often...

Thank you very much <3
Reply
:iconsexyteddybear27:
SexyTeddyBear27 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
A very touching poem :)
Reply
:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.. <3
Reply
:iconhasrina:
hasrina Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
yes,that truth.
Reply
:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So sad, but true..
Reply
:iconhasrina:
hasrina Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
yahhh.
Reply
:icontenshii777:
Tenshii777 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so amazing c:
I really wish it was possible to just disapear and come back when things have.. calmed down or something ;;
Reply
:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It would make it easier to deal with things.
Reply
:icontabbycat21:
tabbycat21 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
i love it. only if it was possible to just disappear.
Reply
:iconmollylovespie:
MollylovesPIE Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Amazing as always :meow:
Reply
:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww.. thank you <3
Reply
:iconmollylovespie:
MollylovesPIE Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
c:
Reply
:iconsashieboo:
Sashieboo Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
HEADS UP.
if i favorite one of your works without leaving a comment
thats because you have rendered me speechless
which is what this has done * D *
Reply
:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, thank you for the notice lol..
<3<3
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×

:iconinvoking: More from Invoking


Featured in Collections

Literature by WRITERandPOET

poetry by tabbycat21

Writings by 12redroses


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
February 25, 2012
File Size
567 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
1,085
Favourites
41 (who?)
Comments
27
×