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I try to fight, the feelings I, hide inside
And the piosonus thoughts they bring
But darling, they're all that's left
They're all of you, that I've kept
You're still all I want, you're all I need
You're everything, that I believe

But when you're gone
My heart threatens to collapse
Because it's broken in two
And it's missing its other half

Please don't leave, please stay with me...
I can't breathe...
I'm on the edge of insanity...

Part mirage, part nightmare...
Please come back!
I just need to know you're there...

For me...

I know that I've, said I'm fine
That everything, is alright
But darling, I miss the feeling
Of your lips, gently caressing mine
I miss your touch, I miss your laugh
I miss so much, that I know that I can't have

'Cause when you're gone
My heart beats are few
It's broken in two
And so empty now without you

Where have you gone? Are you coming back?
I can't go on...
My vision has faded to black...

Part mirage, part nightmare...
Please come back!
I just need to know you care...

For me...
Part Mirage, Part Nightmare...
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Thebrokengod Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Simply beautiful !! :)
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Invoking Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :P
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perfectlyimperfect19 Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love your writing :) its got such emotion and power in the words you use :) simply amazing :)
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Invoking Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you very much :3
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:iconperfectlyimperfect19:
perfectlyimperfect19 Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome dear :) :)
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HauntedByMyMemories Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow.. perfect poem :) easy to relate to
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Invoking Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Firstly, thank you :D And yeah, I try to make them easy to relate to. People like easy to relate to x3
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Contradictory55 Aug 19, 2012  Student Writer
It's beautiful and heart-breaking and makes me want to say that people live in separate bodies and can still survive, maybe even live again, after a heartbreak.
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Invoking Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'd say that that's a pretty good way to put it. Very well said, my good person :P
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Contradictory55 Aug 19, 2012  Student Writer
=D Thank you very much, my great poet =D
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