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There's broken
Then there's shattered to the core
There's saying I don't care
Or I don't love you anymore

There's hopeless
And theres frustratingly out of reach
There are lessons left to learn
But those lessons they'll never teach

There are promises
Then there are hollow and empty lies
There are moments that you treasure
And moments you want to die

There's lonliness
And there's tired of going on
There is waiting for forever
But forever will never come...
...that title. Makes no sense.
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tamiea Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG this is so beautiful. And Title make lots of sens when one reaches the end of the poem.
There are these almost impalpable emotions :)
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Zachary1991 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Very well done.
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black-angel-lover Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
Adding to favourites..... I am really conecting to thise piece.
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RavenPaw6003 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i love it, its beautiful, really nice job
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Dessert-rose Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconrlytearplz: This is beautiful!
"There is waiting for forever
But forever will never come..."
I LOVE that line!!! it's just brilliant, well done! :clap:
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Invoking Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so very much! <3<3
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Dessert-rose Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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12redroses Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
I feel like everything you said in this poem is true. And that kind of makes me sad. Very good tho. :heart:
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Invoking Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It is sad but true, yes..
Thank you very much<3
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12redroses Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
You're welcome.
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