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My 'To Do' List.

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So this is something new. I think I'll start writing my poems like this. This one was just an abstract practice round. If I decide to continue doing this for my poems, the backgrounds and font will pertain more to the poem itself.

Please, let my know your thoughts on this piece. Anything that you feel could be improved (besides my misspelling of 'somebodies' ene), I would love to know. Thank you <3

This is my 'To Do' list. What's yours?

I would like to thank Google Images for the background. Thank you Google. You make all of our lives easier <3
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RavensHiddenSoul's avatar
This is so empowering, so inspiring... so beautifully intense and compassionate and CERTAIN in its empowerment! I love it.

Honestly, the only critique I can give on this is that the decorations are much brighter and starker than the words, which draws more attention to them than the poem. Ultimately the length of the verses draws enoug hattention that maybe it balances out, but I personally would have kept their brightnesses a little closer together, or brightened up the font just a touch...

It really does look gorgeous, though! Rock on~