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My 'To Do' List. by Invoking My 'To Do' List. by Invoking
So this is something new. I think I'll start writing my poems like this. This one was just an abstract practice round. If I decide to continue doing this for my poems, the backgrounds and font will pertain more to the poem itself.

Please, let my know your thoughts on this piece. Anything that you feel could be improved (besides my misspelling of 'somebodies' ene), I would love to know. Thank you <3

This is my 'To Do' list. What's yours?

I would like to thank Google Images for the background. Thank you Google. You make all of our lives easier <3
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RavensHiddenSoul Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
This is so empowering, so inspiring... so beautifully intense and compassionate and CERTAIN in its empowerment! I love it.

Honestly, the only critique I can give on this is that the decorations are much brighter and starker than the words, which draws more attention to them than the poem. Ultimately the length of the verses draws enoug hattention that maybe it balances out, but I personally would have kept their brightnesses a little closer together, or brightened up the font just a touch...

It really does look gorgeous, though! Rock on~
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LivingDreamer97 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This was gorgeous! :happycry:
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menotmyselfori Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Aww, this's adorable :)
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Smile047 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, wow... I can't tell you how much I love this.
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :heart:
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SecretlyFading Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Student Writer
Dear Gods this shot me right in the heart O.o

I think I have an inspiration for a poem now :P
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's excellent~ ouO
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SecretlyFading Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Writer
:3
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SebbyLoverForever Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg I freaken love this! The whole design and poems font. But I really like the poem itself
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~ <3
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