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There’s constantly something wrong with me
I can’t look in the mirror for fear I’ll see
Another part of me that I can’t let be
I want to cut it out of my soul
And just live with the gaping hole
Take control and choose to lose
The part of my heart where the insides bruised

I didn’t fall; I was caught by the lonely, crushing darkness
Of this I’m sure; it was there more than you ever were

I don’t know why the love I need
Is flowing in the blood I bleed
Yes, I’m confused and, yes, I’m a mess
Frustrations magnified by stress
I don’t know why I pushed so far
New cuts cover where the old ones are
My scars are scarred, my heart’s in shards
I’m breaking down like a house of cards

I fell already blind into decimating blackness
And used what I could find of my heart as target practice
Ever get that feeling you're not as good as you could be?
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Dreamer-of-Magic Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014   General Artist
I love these lines: "I don’t know why the love I need/Is flowing in the blood I bleed" :heart:
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Savannahcantdraw Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow this is really deep stuff, i love it!! i can really relate to it,you are truly talented :)
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SharpPointyThings Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student General Artist
This would make a wonderful monologue.
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gab226789 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Writer
Terrific might I say as a fellow poet it really spoke to me and flows through my mind like water and I must say you truly have a gift
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CrazyMai Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Writer
That poem is so wonderful ♥ It really touched me and I have very often the same thoughts or feel the same..
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NoOneKnowsWhereToGo Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist
That's me when I fail a test I actually study hardcore for, well not really fail, 70s are failing to me~ 
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Tinsel2 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
I do receive that feeling quite a lot. This piece really spoke to me and has even mirrored some thoughts that I have had about myself.
keep writing beautifully <3
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EmilytheHedgehogFTW Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That was wonderful, and I understand it completely... Happy cry (Tears of joy) 
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SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014   General Artist
First: I feel the need to hug you. :hug:

Second: 
This is really good, the emotions are very strong. I especially felt the end.
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ArenaDeborah Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
very deep amazing :D (Big Grin) 
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