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I am broken. I’m a waste.
Tell me something I don’t know
Say it to my face

You think you know me better
‘Cause of things you don’t remember
You’re trying to make me hurt
My self-esteem’s in the dirt

Pick out all my flaws and laugh at every one
I’m just a stubborn kid with a loaded gun
In the middle of the desert
Taking shots at the sun

But my body is the M16

My mouth is the trigger
My lungs; the magazine
And if you can’t already see
I’m about ready
To go on a killing spree
If you can’t shut up long enough
To hear what I have to say

Then I’m locked and loaded
Have a nice day.
Shut up and listen to me. Please.
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Phan5everx2 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love it. The ladt line is so sassy-and done. I can see someone, battered and bloody spitting "Shut up and listen to me. I'm tired of your shit" amazing.
LylliaAshlyn42 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifully written, just like the rest.
artistic-heart13 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Serious but funny at the end. One thing; did you mean to put a ";" after lungs or a ","? Maybe it's just me...Anyway, very relatable and well-written.
K-hione Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's very good. A lot of feelings. 
songbird0705 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this :3 
X3beyondthesunx3 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wicked awesome.
NoOneKnowsWhereToGo Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'll always listen to you and I get like that sometimes.
Lynnae-Madison Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool poem! ^^
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