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With my back to the door
I can’t help but fall to the floor
Out of breath, out of time
Out of sight, out of my mind

They’re tempting me; they lead astray
They mark my words; I am their prey
I can’t fight them anymore
So let them in and end this war

Leave me to my demons
Let them have at me
And strip me of my reasons
To ever be happy

I am broken enough
So that they fit in the cracks
I never wanted to be this
But now there’s no turning back

Let them take control
Because without you in my life
This is how a person like myself
Can ever become whole.
They're just demons...
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
Yes, they're demons and we all have them, but even still life is good!:)
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NoOneKnowsWhereToGo Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Dear Ryan, I sang the entire thing and loved it. Love Anita :3
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you did <3
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NoOneKnowsWhereToGo Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist
:3 I'm glad you write such nice things <3 Now just don't break them xD
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RyuujinV Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
... *whistle* And here I thought I could write. I love the scheme and I love the subject matter, both seem right up my alley. The flow was a bit weird at parts, but overall I really like this. Might even inspire me to start writing my own stuff again.
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~ Yeah, there were some awkward parts, but I liked how it sounded in my head. And if it does inspire you to write, then that makes me a million times happier~ Again, thank you :meow:
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mangawriter123456789 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
reminds me on souleater :'(
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I guess a bit, yeah x3
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noonehasthisusername Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
This is ... creative! Awesome idea with the whole demon thing! The end part was sad, but I like it! Great poem and-oh god I'm staring to sound all smart and stuff!! Anyways, I loved it, awesome job!!!
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much~ :icontardglompplz: Ouo
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