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What weighs on your mind?
What's taking up your time?
You tell me not to worry and you swear you're really fine

Please open up to me
Tell me of your fears
You know I'll kiss the scars and I'll wipe away your tears

Don't keep it to yourself
You know you're not alone
I couldn't live my life without you ever coming home

I'd be so lost inside
I wouldn't recognize
The person that I see in the reflection of your eyes

Just tell me you're okay, and that you love me too
I don't know what I'd do
If ever I lost you…
Something a friend told me once... Don't keep it to yourself.

Again, I allude to my girlfriends poem :iconemorapunzle: [link]
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evrum Apr 13, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Amen to that <3
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tommyboywood Jan 23, 2013  Professional Writer
very nice
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Invoking Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, once more :meow:
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:icontinsel2:
D'aww :3 You're such a talented writer/poet!
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Invoking Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
dskhg~ Thank youu~ :iconchuuplz:
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:icontinsel2:
^.^ you're very welcome!
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DarkSxKitten Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautifully written. Nice emotion in this piece.
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Invoking Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
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perfectlyimperfect19 Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very sweet :) love it :)
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Invoking Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why, thank you so much <3...
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