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I'm sorry you're disappointed
But believe me I really try
To be your one and only
Please, darling, please don't cry

I'm sorry I can't be
One hundred percent perfect
But even if I was
Would I still even be worth it

I'm sorry there are things
That not even I can do
I can't get far on paper wings
But darling, we aren't through

I'm sorry I'm nothing more
Than a step above worthless
But even if I was
I still wouldn't have a purpose

I'm sorry there are times
When you feel like you're broken
I'll be there and you'll be fine
Darling, let's just be open

I'm sorry I didn't know
How much you were really hurting
I guess it goes to show
That I'm less than undeserving...
"Darling - don't lie to me, darling, don't..."
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Oh, I really like this! :)
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ice1600 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
Absolutely brilliant..I can really feel the meaning to it..
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.. I'm glad that you can ^^ Means that I've done well.
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ice1600 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
haha very well!
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JoysAngel Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
This is beautiful, it sounds as if you really understand the feelings behind it all <3
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That would be because I do :P
And thank you so very much <3
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JoysAngel Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
oh right xD well that just makes it better =3
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tamiea Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice :) very moving... every time I read it it makes me think about somebody :) I will wait for more with impatience :)
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Saidye Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh my god
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Invoking Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You don't have to call me god, Invoking works just fine...
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Saidye Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student General Artist
LMAO nono,I meant this is freaking amazing. And so painful, but so amazing..
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:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh LOL. Sorry :3. Well, thank you very much for your support. It really means a lot to me <3
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Saidye Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Student General Artist
No problem. :) <3
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jadetryton Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
this is amazing. <3
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LOKIforDREAMS Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Writer
Very striking. Very biting. Very good. I look forward to more.
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:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you...I won't keep you waiting..
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LOKIforDREAMS Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Writer
You're welcome.
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TTFAA Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful.
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museisforever1207 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
Absolutely beautiful.
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corypot170 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Photographer
This is so beautiful...these emotions are exact(:
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GummyBearKar Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Powerful.
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xPainWithoutLovex Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist
Wonderful!
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Invoking Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much <3
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AndyCandy12 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011
good job, you've made a story without really making a story deary
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Bminus Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Writer
Very nice. Powerful. Keep it up.
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:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. And you can count on it. One more thing - love the username. Makes me LoL :3
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Bminus Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Writer
Haha, thanks. :) And good. Never stop writing. It's such a powerful, and beautiful trade.
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Invoking Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I couldn't have said it better myself.. Thank you for your support.
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Bminus Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Student Writer
I'll be watching, so expect the support from now on, hah.
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Invoking Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Totally made my day. Thanks again.. :']
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