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I am darkness personified.
An abyss so drenched in black
That it leaves me
Horrified.

My heart is a facade
It’s a useless beating lie
Because I've never felt a thing
Except for dead inside.

It’s a war I wage
Inside of my ribcage
That kills me a little more

Every.
Single.

Day.



I like to pretend too
That somewhere beneath the pain
There’s a way I can break through
But I already know…
Things will never be the same.

I lost absolutely everything
I can’t apologize enough
That I didn’t know who to be
When you said that you needed me

My scars are like chains
That keep me from falling apart
Completely.
Go ahead. Leave your hateful comment.
Because at the end of the day
That's all I really wanted.
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:icondiamondangel156:
diamondangel156 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
sorry I don't have any hateful comments<br / />
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wolflover1213 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:heart:
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SebbyLoverForever Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a good poem I don't really think I could be hateful
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No need to be~
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AdrianMinotaur Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your poem sucked, it touched my heart and soul and left them feeling devastated! Okay, super, over exaggeration, I loved this piece(just felt like giving the mean comment you wanted, and to lolz a bit). Your art did touch my heart and soul and while you threw me for a loop at the end I felt rather elated. Elated due to I feel like I understand your pain, and pain shared is pain halved :)
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ThexNightxAngel Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't think I could comment hatefully on this, even for the sake of reverse psychology cx
It's quite good
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honeyroastedfrost Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ouch...
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williamson13 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice, even captivating. Great job.
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SilverWynd Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it, quite relatable
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bradcharper Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i feel just like you....
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:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry, my friend. I truly am. May I ask, in what way?
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:iconbradcharper:
bradcharper Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
getting backstabbed... it gets old.. real quick
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smalltownsillygal Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I totally love it!
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:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lakjfglhuseh~ Thank you, my good person :meow:
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smalltownsillygal Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you're welcome! :)
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NoOneKnowsWhereToGo Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist
Don't be so negative Ryan. :3 I rather like it and I can relate to part of it. It amazes me how you can write so nicely about darker emotions, I guess that's what you'd call it. P. S. I love you unconditionally my friend :3 I hope you have a nice day!
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:iconinvoking:
Invoking Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hey! I know I've been gone for a while, but I had no internet, so... that kind of sucked. But thank you so much, I'm really glad to hear from you again!
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NoOneKnowsWhereToGo Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist
Hey! :3 I noticed but I figured you were busy with school like things and I knew you'd come back eventually! I know the not having internet thing I went though that a couple months ago, not a happy memory. Anyway you are very welcome, I'm glad to hear from you as well and I missed you!
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist
Not sure if this counts as hateful, but i likes it =)
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nooo, tis not hateful at all. I was just remembering some comments I got a long while back and was taking preemptive measures against them e-e

So, thank you <3 ouo
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KuraiTenshiV Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist
=)
As always you are welcome
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