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Beautiful Disaster by Invoking Beautiful Disaster by Invoking
I miss you, even though I pretend that I don't. It hurts just to be awake, just to breathe this air... I don't know if I can keep this facade up for much longer. I tried. But despite all my efforts, you still decided I just wasn't enough. Now you're already with HIM and expect it to not hurt me even more? I- I hate you... I hate you and our memories...
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This is a very heavily adapted existing piece in my gallery. It originally had six quatrains and was also orginally titled "Document 5" [link] (Yes, that was on purpose - completely different story though) but, I decided to retitle to "Beautiful Disaster" because it's catchy and more relatable. This is/can be about a serious break-up or divorce or whatever you want to call it. This was written a while ago, I simply adapted it to this typographic background. I don't really feel like this, but if you do, my heart goes out to you with care :heart:

The font that I used is called "Old Dreams".

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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You write very well. It is not a very cheerfull topic, but that is understandable.  Somehow this work shows real skill
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Invoking Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks you, very much.
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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem at al. When I enjoy reading something it deserves a compliment :)
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aloha! Just a little note to say I’ve used the title of this piece to help me create a title poem which you can read here: madameshadowenn.deviantart.com…
I’ve given you full credit in the comments section, but should you want me to remove your title, please do let me know!
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Invoking Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are most welcome! :rose:
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realARTIZT Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The background is to dark or contrasted to see many lines clearly, but this is one of the best poems I've read lately. Every line flows and ends just right. :) Beautiful job and I hope to read more from you in the future :D Thanks for your submission to #SayItHere!
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LastoftheWolves Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Can I add this to my pictures for the background on my desktop please?? This is just too amazing to resist. Either way, keep up the awesome work! I can't wait to see more!!
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Invoking Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, you may~ Thank you very much <3
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LastoftheWolves Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
THANKS! no problem!
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