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This place brings back so many memories
Each one reminding me what I had
Sometimes, I can’t stand it and I fall to my knees
I can’t believe I had perfection…
And I just let it slip away.

I wish I could tell you, but I don’t know what you’d say
You were my best friend, my everything
You were a part of me and I let you get away
So much for meaning every word that you say…

I wish I could tell you how right you were
I should’ve treated you better and been more mature
But you opened my eyes though it hurt me sometimes
To see how much we were falling apart…

Neither one of us tried; I wish you didn’t just leave
It kills me not knowing what I should feel
Or what to believe
But you probably won’t see this, not this time
And you’ll never know how much this has torn me apart…
I'm glad you saw this.
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xXDead-RoseXx Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student General Artist
pure heart pure mind~
and it takes a man to admit what you just wrote here~ wonderful work~
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Invoking Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~.. I've... had a lot of time to think about these things.
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xXDead-RoseXx Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student General Artist
welcome~ and I bet so and I hope everything turns out to be wonderful for you~
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SunflowerGirlGraphic Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student General Artist
All I can say is "amen".  Actually, I'd be the person on the other end, but it was kinda both of us...me for believing and him for playing...

Anyways, very well done! 
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tulf42 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, this got me deep. This makes me think of my ex girlfriend (don't worry we still get along)
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Invoking Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well I'm glad you still get along. That's good.
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NoOneKnowsWhereToGo Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist
I can relate to this so much and I am having trouble figuring out what to comment. I feel like it is a part of me in a way. Thank you for writing it! <3
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Invoking Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Tis my pleasure <3
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NoOneKnowsWhereToGo Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist
:) I've missed you and your writing so much, you've brightened my day. <3
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Invoking Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry ono Hopefully I'll be back to normal soon.
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