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In the middle of a long forgotten field
Made beautiful by her presence
She sits under the willow
Counting hour after hour

As she waits for the sun to sink under the horizon
A pen whisks it's way across the page
Etching words she cannot verbalize
Filling up the empty spaces in her heart
Explaining the distance in her eyes

Velvet night engulfs her world
A notebook, a pen, and a
Trying-so-hard-not-to-break-but-already-broken girl

She lays her companions down beside her
And turns her tearful gaze up to the sky
Thinking, "Night's like this are worth the pain.
The stars don't know how much joy they bring."

Little did she know
They were thinking
The same thing.
The stars think you're beautiful, too <3
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Pseudonym-Forever Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very mature and loved the ending, a great way to end such a melancholy poem.
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Missparamore Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
This is just wow.
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sushisocke Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
made me shiver...
I wonder if you realize your talent to reach out to people, to put thoughts into words and to formulate hidden wishes.
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the-golden-eagle Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing
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Necromancer78 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Enthralling and emotive; I really enjoyed this thank you.
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Invoking Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, Necro.
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CrazyMai Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Student Writer
Gorgeous ♥ 
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tardin13 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
This is truly beautiful.
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Hawkshadow743 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
I agree with :iconfameisdead:! This is wonderful.
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
^^!!!
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